It’s also one of those sentences that changes meaning depending on which word you accentuate.
Just an FYI
You obviously have to
Show me that butt hole
“Gurl that is a bootyhole” is seven
show me that butthole.
gurl that is a bootyhole.
damn you shit with that?Bushy or corny
Your dumper makes me horny
Show me that butthole
Show me that butthole Show me that butthole oh please Show me that butthole
Wow haikus are easy
Ha I just made the same one up and came to comment
Haikus love nature.
But I’m a man of culture.
Show me that butthole.
Show me that butthole
Don’t make me ask you again
Show me that butthole
O beautiful cat
You are the glorious beast
Show me that butthole
“There’s blood in your stool,
You need a proctoscopy;
Show me that butthole.”The moths had a feast;
Now all of your underpants
show me that butthole.Reddit usernames
Used to frequently be like
“Show me your butthole.”haiku aren’t that hard
It’s five, then seven, then five.
You’ll get used to it.
Five syllables is
Just enough for me to say
Show me that buttholeAn alien ship,
Eerie light and booming voice:
“SHOW ME THAT BUTTHOLE.”I need a linguist to tell me why this one feels strange, but if we switch the first line to
Alien spaceshipit seems better.You’re right. I think it works better because it’s more consistent and poetry benefits from an economy of words, elimination of waffle, distillation to the most concise expression, particularly with haiku. But more than anything, it benefits from being poetic, which your version does, thank you:
Alien spaceship,
Eerie light and booming voice:
“SHOW ME THAT BUTTHOLE.”
