• sephallen@lemmy.ml
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    3 hours ago

    I’m not sure what the downvotes are for but I don’t think you proof read what you posted. Two of the paragraphs are almost identical.

    • ☆ Yσɠƚԋσʂ ☆@lemmy.ml
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      2 hours ago

      it’s easy to miss stuff like that when rearranging the flow of the text, but feel free to engage with what I said though instead of nitpicking